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Retreat At Twilight Beach Nk

two flamingos they are peach as the sun they are one romantic sans frantic so peaceful at twilight beach solitude of calming passion at lakeside, they are sweet watercolors blending one leg is ascending not shallow, love is deep the painting makes me weep i hold it to my heart from life’s sorrows, i take retreat 8/27/2022 Contest: Charlie New-Ku Sponsor: Charles Messina checked with rhymezone.com

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2022 1:59:00 PM
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I enjoyed reading your winning work. Way to go, lady. Congratulations. I like the metaphors used in this one. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 5:38:00 PM
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Thank you so much! xxoo
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/19/2022 2:02:00 PM
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Back with big congratulations on your win Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 5:39:00 PM
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Thank you, Linda!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/19/2022 9:50:00 AM
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Scenes during retreat at twilight beach are beautiful - flamingos, lakeside... finally the philosophy. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2022 10:54:00 AM
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Thank you, Christuraj!
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/18/2022 3:48:00 PM
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Beautifully written, Kim. You did an awesome job with this form. Great imagery as well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2022 4:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Charlie!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/30/2022 12:14:00 PM
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Ooh - nice penning Kim. A lovely picture of passion! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2022 6:56:00 PM
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Thanks, Linda!
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Harry Horsman
Date: 8/29/2022 5:56:00 PM
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Another of the new haiku, Kim, just read a splendid one and now another. love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2022 6:56:00 PM
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I appreciate it, Harry!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/29/2022 4:03:00 AM
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Kim, you've given these flamingos a personality using Charlie's form to its full potential. Very nicely written.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2022 6:55:00 AM
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Thank you, Jenna!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 8/28/2022 2:50:00 AM
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Wish I could visualize such a dazzling image.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2022 12:37:00 PM
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Thank you ~ Kim
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2022 8:44:00 PM
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Love what you've done with this Charlie-ku format, Kim. Can we dance? (the flamingo?) ~ Senor Gersh (Or should I write, 'Senior?')
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2022 12:37:00 PM
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If you think you can swing it ~ Kim ;)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/27/2022 2:51:00 PM
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Oh wow I love how you did this, Kim. Magnifico
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2022 7:28:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Andrea! :)

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