Jesus De Castro Poet Quatrain

Retract Two Point Zero

I was out of my element

From my phone, the message was sent

On my door I see a deep dent

Hope all these are not permanent

 

Been having more misses than hits

I wasn’t sure but I called it quits

Now due to stress on my face, zits

Like a sweat soaked pig, wet armpits

 

I didn’t intend to let you go

‘Wanna hold on but it didn’t show

With that, I’ve reached my all time low

I’m in remorse, in deep sorrow

 

I wish I can undo the act

I want you back and that’s a fact

Let’s start again, renew the pact

My lame break-up line, I retract

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Beata Agustin December 13, 2024 at 11:17 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 21, 2016 at 8:53 PM this is a great read, Jesus. LINDA

Skat A January 15, 2016 at 8:59 PM well done........ love SKAT