Retired

Said dear old Santa to his elves, You will have to go by yourselves. I am old and tired. Time that I retired Just get toys from the Walmart shelves.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2023 1:14:00 PM

LOve it. Good one!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/8/2023 4:10:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea, its much harder to be a comedian than it is to be a poet! (but I tried). Really appreciate your encouragement. Best wishes for a happy week ahead.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/6/2023 1:26:00 PM

Just how I feel.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/6/2023 1:32:00 PM

Aw Victor that's no good. Hope you are feeling better soon. Sending some best wishes your way. Wen

Jay Narain

Date: 12/6/2023 9:38:00 AM

Love the last line, Nice poem.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/6/2023 11:02:00 AM

Just a bit of fun Jay, Thanks for your comment.