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Retaliation-the action of harming someone because they have harmed oneself, revenge~ protectionism invites retaliation—def it is what it is seeker of redress queen of retaliation~ promotes dull v e n g e a n c e

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Date: 5/28/2025 7:28:00 PM
very eerie !
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/29/2025 2:36:00 PM
Mystic Rose, Yes, the shadowing of photo's can make the most innocent look eerie ~
Date: 5/28/2025 3:30:00 PM
You've got your creative turned on. Enjoyed this .. CayCay
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/29/2025 2:34:00 PM
Ty, CC! all as usual~
Date: 5/28/2025 1:29:00 PM
WOW!!! What a write and picture you have here. Have a wonderful day writing away.......
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/28/2025 1:33:00 PM
Tyvm, Paula! Have a nice day , xhugs
Date: 5/28/2025 12:58:00 PM
Wise words Anaya. She looks like a cranky ol' bat. Still, I'll bet she can whip up a winning apple pie. Grannies do
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/28/2025 1:08:00 PM
Oh, you gave me an idea, one of her holding the apple, you're too funny-- she is the granny of hatred (what do you call them? Gas bags) and has her fans indeed, she inspires them! ~ all in fun of course. :D this really isn't my bag.
Date: 5/28/2025 12:31:00 PM
Oh, because of your comment I got it better. Thanks. Good advice.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/28/2025 12:52:00 PM
Yes, remorse vs apology..in this senryu actually, i find revenge humorous, it's really all the ego, vanity, self-victimization, please don't get me wrong, venting can be therapeutic , what urks are the intentions of words~ revenge is hatred, vengeful forms of justice -- self-reflection?
Date: 5/28/2025 11:46:00 AM
I <3 the Queen (former) if any resemblance, a coincidence ~
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/28/2025 1:37:00 PM
Take it as an act of goodwill...No wars were ever won without sacrifice!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/28/2025 1:10:00 PM
Lol Tommy, what may be you thinking? Shhhh ~ mums the word
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/28/2025 12:55:00 PM
Buwahahaha

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