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Retail Showdown

I will say it loud and proud, from a cloud or in a crowd; I will say it by rail, mail, in a fierce wail or pierced braille: I do not like the holiday assail so trite-spiked by all retail: Pumpkins in the summer, early turkey ads for dinner; Santa as a sprinter so early, his burly gets girly trimmer; Cupid on December twenty six making him a stupid nit wit; Easter clothes and candy posing faster than when dandy!! Time is precious, it’s a crime to infect us with flare unfair. Greedy nerve ever serves “pay today” without dismay way before calendars punt the month of the day our way. March 23, 2018 Juli – Michelle / Rhyme Battle X - Showdown

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Date: 4/9/2018 11:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this delightfully fun (and true) rhyme. Enjoyed it!
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Date: 4/9/2018 3:20:00 PM
I am with you this, CayCay! Very true and cleverly written! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/7/2018 11:24:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 4/6/2018 11:33:00 PM
Awesome write, CayCay, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/6/2018 8:38:00 PM
It is so true CayCay. We used to be able to enjoy the holidays before the next holiday is upon us. I saw Valentine items being sold with Easter items etc. Sadly. Congratulations on your excellent winning poem! : )
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Date: 4/6/2018 6:23:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Caycay!! Luv ya
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Date: 4/6/2018 5:24:00 PM
So very true, CayCay, life goes by fast enough as it is, we certainly don't need to speed it up. Congrats on your win my poetic friend. John
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Date: 4/6/2018 4:23:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win, CayCay! Janice
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Date: 4/6/2018 12:23:00 PM
CayCay, Congratulations on your placement in my Rhyme Battle contest. :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 4/4/2018 12:06:00 PM
All you say can be very aggravating for sure. I like the way you repeat sounds, for instance "I will say it by rail, mail, in a fierce wail or pierced braille:" Nicely done.
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Date: 3/28/2018 3:26:00 PM
SO original and clever, Caycay. Wow, I am glad I finally saw this one. I finally thought how to do one myself last night!! But now all these many contests are close to finishing and I have to crowd a bunch of posts together. Uggggg.
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Date: 3/25/2018 2:01:00 AM
Indeedy, CayCay, we seem to be shopping our lives away. Easter eggs in January, Halloween in August, Christmas in September. No wonder I feel older than I am :( Viv x
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Date: 3/23/2018 10:32:00 PM
This reminds me so much of Dr. Suess; I love it! And it is how I feel too!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/23/2018 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sweetie! I have yet to meet anyone who likes the way retail handles holidays, but then I have no friends or acquaintances that own a store, much less a chain of stores. Greed. Shameful greed. Thanks for commenting, Caren - always like hearing from you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/23/2018 9:11:00 PM
Here, here!!! I couldn't agree more. I would like to comment more but it is already March and I have to hurry out and get my Christmas tree before they run out.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/23/2018 9:23:00 PM
Grab some fireworks, a pumpkin, candy, and a turkey on your way to the Christmas tree! I enjoyed your comments VERY much! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/23/2018 8:33:00 PM
that is why my favorite holiday is Thanksgiving, nothing to be sold on but family and a great meal...
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/23/2018 9:23:00 PM
Hey, Frederic - thanks for the visit and comments. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 3/23/2018 12:54:00 PM
Good one, CayCay. Everything is so commercialed - how else can they make a buck?
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2018 11:24:00 PM
Nothing by greed indeed.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/23/2018 6:18:00 PM
They fared just fine in the decades when they sold relevant merchandise during the relevant month, even when retail wasn't open on Sundays (remember?). It is pure, simple greed, in my opinion. Thanks for commenting, Line - I appreciate you ... CayCay
Date: 3/23/2018 12:24:00 PM
Bravo caycay! It drives me crazy all they do is plug crap merchandise for weeks before a certain day. I know on boxing day they will get the Easter products on the shelves arghhhhhh:-( hugs Jan xx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/23/2018 6:19:00 PM
I know not what boxing day is?? It is awful. When I was young, stores were closed in America on Sunday - now everything is not only as stated in my poem, but also opened 24 hours (many.) It is greed, nothing more. Glad to have your comments - always. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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