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my aunts been calling
my mothers sister
she's crazy 
and lonely
her own children hate her
she cycles through her family
looking for someone
to have tea with or talk to
but I can't 
go
there.
She looks like my mother
she has her voice
like a knife in my heart
like a hand on my throat
the pain is suffocation
the result is retreat
I can't bear to see her
to sit and remember
to miss her and hate her
to bring her so close
I'll keep one away and prevent the other
from opening
my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Joseph Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 1:52 PM
family relationships can be gut wrenching. Thanks for the comment Carolyn.
Devonshire Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 10:35 AM
How sad, Veronica. I had a lonely aunt whom many would describe as crazy, but now that she's gone, we miss her sense of humor. I hope your aunt finds someone who appreciates her company. That may be all that is separating her from being "normal." Loneliness can make us crazy. I love your poem; it brought back memories. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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