Rest's Sweet Company

I could not pause to rest
    so Rest enveloped me
  In the guise of Injury
    O, the red that I did see

  Yet as time passed
    in Rest's sweet company
  Much to my surprised delight
    my mood became carefree 

  What need for constant deadlines
    the press of Industry
  For now that I am rested up
    Why would I ever leave



  ______________________________
  Note: Yes, I took something from 
  Emily Dickinson: The first two lines
  were 'the take.' After that, I kept
  her style, but created a different 
  story-line.
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Jones Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 8:03 PM
I think Emily would love your work. Hugs
Wolf Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 8:13 PM
Aw, thanks, Karen! Nicest compliment I've had in quite a while. (Emily D. is my absolute favorite poet of all time). Smiles, Gershon
Hawkins Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:29 PM
A soothing, lovely rhyme, rest is needed to overcome all sorts of ills and grievances.
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:39 PM
Thank you for the soothing words of comfort, Shirley. I needed them!! With appreciation, Gershon
Brotherton Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 6:52 PM
I think Emily would cheer for your creativity my friend.
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:42 PM
Three Amherst, MA chee-uhs from Emily! lol. (Like a Boston accent - where you pahk you cah in Hahvahd Squah. Dja eat some chowduh?!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Sweet rest! We all need it! Nice work!
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:45 PM
Rest... precious rest... As long as it's not in a 'restroom' or, worse, 'a rest home!' Rest E. Tootion
Flood Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 4:07 PM
A smarter write than you may think, GW. In the UK, a lot of people ‘stopped’ for covid… and never restarted. Apparently ‘early retirement’ is something of an epidemic. Enjoyed muchly. Terry
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:46 PM
Of course, Terry -- esp. since I don't think. lol. Appreciated, gw
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Hello Gershon, That a boy! Rest. Enjoy your evening my friend. /darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Hello Gershon, I hope all is well with you. You are welcome. Enjoy your weekend.my friend. / Darlene/
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:49 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene.
Romios Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Nice,,, I sensed Emily early on, Have great day, Pangie xx
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:50 PM
Yup. I took a 'census,' and there was Emily, all right! ~ By Gump
Summers Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:41 PM
I like the way you did this Gershon. It worked out very well. John
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 8:52 PM
Well, John!! Long time-no see. Hope all is well! Thanks, gw
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