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Rest's Sweet Company

I could not pause to rest so Rest enveloped me In the guise of Injury O, the red that I did see Yet as time passed in Rest's sweet company Much to my surprised delight my mood became carefree What need for constant deadlines the press of Industry For now that I am rested up Why would I ever leave ______________________________ Note: Yes, I took something from Emily Dickinson: The first two lines were 'the take.' After that, I kept her style, but created a different story-line.

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Date: 10/9/2023 8:03:00 PM
I think Emily would love your work. Hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2023 8:13:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Karen! Nicest compliment I've had in quite a while. (Emily D. is my absolute favorite poet of all time). Smiles, Gershon
Date: 9/21/2023 8:29:00 PM
A soothing, lovely rhyme, rest is needed to overcome all sorts of ills and grievances.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2023 8:39:00 PM
Thank you for the soothing words of comfort, Shirley. I needed them!! With appreciation, Gershon
Date: 9/21/2023 6:52:00 PM
I think Emily would cheer for your creativity my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2023 8:42:00 PM
Three Amherst, MA chee-uhs from Emily! lol. (Like a Boston accent - where you pahk you cah in Hahvahd Squah. Dja eat some chowduh?!
Date: 9/21/2023 6:33:00 PM
Sweet rest! We all need it! Nice work!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2023 8:45:00 PM
Rest... precious rest... As long as it's not in a 'restroom' or, worse, 'a rest home!' Rest E. Tootion
Date: 9/21/2023 4:07:00 PM
A smarter write than you may think, GW. In the UK, a lot of people ‘stopped’ for covid… and never restarted. Apparently ‘early retirement’ is something of an epidemic. Enjoyed muchly. Terry
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2023 8:46:00 PM
Of course, Terry -- esp. since I don't think. lol. Appreciated, gw
Date: 9/21/2023 3:25:00 PM
Hello Gershon, That a boy! Rest. Enjoy your evening my friend. /darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2023 10:28:00 AM
Hello Gershon, I hope all is well with you. You are welcome. Enjoy your weekend.my friend. / Darlene/
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2023 8:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene.
Date: 9/21/2023 2:46:00 PM
Nice,,, I sensed Emily early on, Have great day, Pangie xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2023 8:50:00 PM
Yup. I took a 'census,' and there was Emily, all right! ~ By Gump
Date: 9/21/2023 1:41:00 PM
I like the way you did this Gershon. It worked out very well. John
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/21/2023 8:52:00 PM
Well, John!! Long time-no see. Hope all is well! Thanks, gw

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