Restoring Waters

Restoring Waters

A Poem by Debbie_Philly 
" Inspiring piece about not giving up , and not letting other bring you down. "
 
RESTORING WATERS
 
The ripple effects of the calm tempted water relaxes me
Soothes my soul till my inner being is illuminated with
brilliance , restoring me to life.
Reassuring waters wash over me lifting my indiscretions
I start to feel my inner strength flourish leading me from
hibernation.
Sparkling liquid pools of rejuvenation immerse my essence
down into it’s depth of blue limpid protection so that I
may emerge  unpretentious yet proud of who I've become.
Once filled with self doubt like an irrelevant child looking
for validation.
I've been emancipated into real womanhood, relevant  in every
way possible . Come bath here, all who doubt their worth
Drink of its enlightenment until you too transform and
resurface kicking to the top of life once more.
 
By: Debbie Kelly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/5/2014 5:03:00 AM
OH SH*T DM-K!...This is "DEEP"!!! Fantastic Write!!! It seems each of your poems I read, I feel! Good Job! xoxoxo//Sinclair
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert... thats a great thing to hear :)
Date: 2/4/2014 7:57:00 PM
Another very good poem Debbie, you have impressed me! I love it! :) xoxo
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:29:00 PM
oops typo... Very much !..lol
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:28:00 PM
Thank you again Chris... always !! ery much !! :)
Date: 2/4/2014 6:28:00 PM
I'm surprised no one has commented, this is very good. If you have a chance look up my poem The perfect women's club. I think you might enjoy it.
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:30:00 PM
Thank you very very much Richard and I promise you I will be over and read your poems.. Im looking forward to it :)
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