Restored By Her Touch

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          So comestible
from her soft lips to her hips
     hern unused soothing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 8, 2015 at 8:24 PM
James, wow... A delightful and sensual senryu.... Linda
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September 15, 2009 at 4:15 AM
Who is this woman you are so fond of?does she know the way you feel?she must be touched by your verses,cos your writes are intriguing--good job-Celina
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August 31, 2009 at 12:23 AM
A tender poem James.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Chircop Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 12:36 PM
Her touch,her soft lips,her hips...lust ,passion and more......beautiful,im reading this write and im finding myself whispering the words huskily..her touch...ssshh--excellent write,just so romantic--charma
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Some women might object to the "surplus" part.....but I find this highly romantic !!! Ha ! Lovely senryu!!!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Interesting Senryu. Keep writing. Sara
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