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Restored By Her Touch

. So comestible from her soft lips to her hips hern unused soothing

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2015 8:24:00 PM

James, wow... A delightful and sensual senryu.... Linda

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 9/15/2009 4:15:00 AM

Who is this woman you are so fond of?does she know the way you feel?she must be touched by your verses,cos your writes are intriguing--good job-Celina

Brian Strand

Date: 8/31/2009 12:23:00 AM

A tender poem James.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/30/2009 12:36:00 PM

Her touch,her soft lips,her hips...lust ,passion and more......beautiful,im reading this write and im finding myself whispering the words huskily..her touch...ssshh--excellent write,just so romantic--charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2009 12:35:00 PM

Some women might object to the "surplus" part.....but I find this highly romantic !!! Ha ! Lovely senryu!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2009 12:31:00 PM

Interesting Senryu. Keep writing. Sara