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Written: September 11, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Don't fret, dear; let's wend off the strife, Candor your winsome grace—embrace life. With a smile—arouse your inner fire, Ignite the magic; cater glamour to inspire. Revamp your vibes—yield them to radiate, With the incitement of compassion, illuminate. Empower the night to be a canvas for our dance, Culminate in a symphony of romance. Desultory whispers—replenish the air, As diaphanous souls entwine in a rhythm so rare. The night comes alive with a dulcet melody, As love's symphony apes, lights shine merrily. Our souls are in a dalliance—a longing dance, Bodies squirming, hearts fluttering, stance. With every toast, zeal will appear, Early dawdles are the dulcet music we hear. As a beacon, your smile paves the way, Honing my grasp, velvety as tunes, light as spray. The sky is our gossamer, and the stars our harbinger, As we swirl and spin to the beat of a cosmic arbiter. Hearts mellifluously carol a saccharine song, as the opulent moon dances and bears us along. Every tread, every nudge, every glance, Speaks volumes of passion in a pastiche dance. Once again, dear, let's ravel in the heavenly night, Bosom compassion; wend our spirits; bear flight. A sumptuous moment, no quest to pretend, Our hearts will carol—until the seraglio trend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/12/2023 10:47:00 AM
The opulent moon dances, i love that! This is such an ethereal and cosmically divine ambience youve painted in such a moving manner, the way you’ve described this dance would make any reader want this dance to never end! How profound and stunning is the way you craft and articulate your thoughts. I really love the line “ sumptuous moment no quest to pretend” “ the night to be a canvas “ so melodious and the way you rhyme is beyond impeccable! I am in awe as always . You are truly so gifted
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Date: 9/12/2023 10:43:00 AM
Romantic and impressive penning as usual, Sir.
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Date: 9/12/2023 7:05:00 AM
Such a beckoning and enveloping poem . As I read, I delved deeper and deeper becoming part of the dance and not wanting it to stop ! You have captured the spirit of passion …. Rays of magic woven together to entice and entrance ! I especially loved ~ Empower the night to be a canvas for our dance ! Such a beautiful invitation ! Passion and connection at its best through your magical words . Hugs dear Lasaad , Sussn :)
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Date: 9/12/2023 6:42:00 AM
You've so enchantingly created a fairytale ambience with your spellbinding words and I'm as always in awe of your magnificent wordplay. The way you rhyme in the most perfect, saccharine and resplendent rhythm, whilst weaving depth between the strings of these phrases everytime, this is just beyond my calibre and I'm in true respectful admiration of your magnificent work. I love so many lines here especially "As diaphanous souls entwine in a rhythm so rare", "our hearts will Carol" just wow!
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Date: 9/12/2023 5:39:00 AM
A symphony of words invoking uplifting vibes of inspiration throughout, my friend. Your pen is on fire, Lasaad.
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Date: 9/11/2023 9:37:00 PM
"Desultory whispers—replenish the air, As diaphanous souls entwine in a rhythm so rare. The night comes alive with a dulcet melody, As love's symphony apes, lights shine merrily." What a heavenly ambiance you have created! Watching this synchronized waltzing of the love laden souls in the intoxicating beauty and radiance of the night, who can stay unmoved! Your poetry is a class in itself and your quill moves with felicity to express any emotion. Great dear Lasaad.
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Date: 9/11/2023 9:19:00 PM
Very impressive and truly romantic, Sotto.
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Date: 9/11/2023 6:34:00 PM
Sigh. Just heavenly. So romantic, so idyllic and optimistic that all will be perfect, passion ignites with every breath. Lasaad this is a magnificent piece. Its impossible to feel anything but happy after reading it. To be able to write like this is such a wonderful gift. Best wishes SV
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