Restlessly Resting

I sat in the field
my heart in my hand
grass blows beneath me 
it sways where I stand
when the spell binds loose
and it's all in my head
I'm restlessly resting awake in my bed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Frisch Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 7:13 PM
I love this one! And its really cool how you thought of this and wrote it in like.... 2 min! i know because i watched you write it... lol
Doreus Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 6:45 AM
this is beautiful... gorgeous... i love the twist at the end and the alliteration
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