restless reveries hiku

northern lights s p a r k l e through the gaze of topaz g a l e s r e s t l e s s reveries

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/9/2025 1:47:00 PM

IE, you've captured the wavy nature and movement of the aurora. It's a real treat to think about and imagine. We had some amazing views in the northern US a few months ago after a strong solar flare. It seemed to be pink and aquamarine. Rather remarkable to read this and think about that. We're so lucky we have a planet that defends us from the particles striking our atmosphere. Smiles!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/7/2025 11:38:00 AM

ooh la la de da!! …topaz gales, restless reveries…making my day, sweet one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2025 5:42:00 PM

I bet it was a win congrats. I see a congrats below

Paige Hind

Date: 5/5/2025 11:00:00 AM

Gorgeous! What a different "light" - <3

Ink Empress
Date: 5/5/2025 12:21:00 PM

Thank you beautiful

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/5/2025 7:19:00 AM

Great haiku, Ink~~creative. CONGRATS! Janice

Ink Empress
Date: 5/5/2025 12:20:00 PM

Thank you dear janice so nice to see you here in comments. Sending you light always

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/5/2025 4:39:00 AM

what a spellbinding beauty! I always dream to see the northern lights and this haiku takes me there. I love the endless reverie! Congratulations. A fave for me. ^___^JCB

Ink Empress
Date: 5/5/2025 12:20:00 PM

Thank you dear poetic soul, i appreciate your support and fave too. Sending you light