restless reveries hiku

northern lights s p a
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through the gaze of topaz g a l e s 
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          s    reveries
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Beaufort Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:47 PM
IE, you've captured the wavy nature and movement of the aurora. It's a real treat to think about and imagine. We had some amazing views in the northern US a few months ago after a strong solar flare. It seemed to be pink and aquamarine. Rather remarkable to read this and think about that. We're so lucky we have a planet that defends us from the particles striking our atmosphere. Smiles!!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 11:38 AM
ooh la la de da!! …topaz gales, restless reveries…making my day, sweet one!
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 5:42 PM
I bet it was a win congrats. I see a congrats below
Hind Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Gorgeous! What a different "light" - <3
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 12:21 PM
Thank you beautiful
Canerdy Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Great haiku, Ink~~creative. CONGRATS! Janice
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Thank you dear janice so nice to see you here in comments. Sending you light always
Brul Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 4:39 AM
what a spellbinding beauty! I always dream to see the northern lights and this haiku takes me there. I love the endless reverie! Congratulations. A fave for me. ^___^JCB
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Thank you dear poetic soul, i appreciate your support and fave too. Sending you light
Buhagiar Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 3:06 AM
This is a superb hiku. You wrote it perfectly.
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Thank you so much dear Victor, grateful always
Singh Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 1:11 AM
Deep and profound.Like it.
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Thank you dear akham. Appreciate it
Jama Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 12:44 AM
Gorgeous imagery throughout this winning hiku. Congratulations sis
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:59 AM
I appreciate you sis always thank u so much
DiMino Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 3:14 PM
Very mystical. Beguiling imagery!
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Thank you dear Joe, appreciate your comment
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 1:46 PM
You are superb with these stylized ku's!! Awesome
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:47 AM
Thank you sweet andrea. Miss you
Bordner Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 11:57 AM
The landscapes of your emotions are a natural wonder Poetess...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Justin
Rhymes Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 11:25 AM
It’s my dream to see mothers light someday. How I wish . Love this
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 11:46 AM
You mean northern lights lol someday! Yes. Haha
Liguori Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 9:34 AM
This is the best haiku ever!!! I love it. Keep them coming!!!
Empress Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 10:36 AM
Thank you dear robert, you should write one too! Appreciate your support
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