Restless Nights

'Pon a bed of nails I wait,
longing for her touch

Quiet footsteps follow
the creaking of my door

Ah

At last, 
Beauty's warm breath
puts this beast at rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 18, 2015 at 11:59 AM
hi Jimi, I love how you end you with the rest you needed... Hugs SKAT
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April 4, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Fantastic free verse and your pops was right when he said you could write! Love it! Mind of a Serial Killer 5 has been posted. You wanted more.
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March 31, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Superb write My poetic son ! Awesome Jimmer ! I told you that you had the gift of write ! Have a safe journey today son.....much love, pops
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April 22, 2015 at 9:05 AM
had tah revisit this write again....it rocks thats fer sure. And now that I've read it for about the 20th time....a month later I realize that you were right(write) about "A".....awesome son !
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