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Restless Nights

'Pon a bed of nails I wait, longing for her touch Quiet footsteps follow the creaking of my door Ah At last, Beauty's warm breath puts this beast at rest

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Skat A

Date: 4/18/2015 11:59:00 AM

hi Jimi, I love how you end you with the rest you needed... Hugs SKAT

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/4/2015 7:40:00 PM

Fantastic free verse and your pops was right when he said you could write! Love it! Mind of a Serial Killer 5 has been posted. You wanted more.

James Peranteau

Date: 3/31/2015 12:01:00 PM

Superb write My poetic son ! Awesome Jimmer ! I told you that you had the gift of write ! Have a safe journey today son.....much love, pops

James Peranteau
Date: 4/22/2015 9:05:00 AM

had tah revisit this write again....it rocks thats fer sure. And now that I've read it for about the 20th time....a month later I realize that you were right(write) about "A".....awesome son !