Restless Longing

Silky smooth bodies meet in the night 
Enveloping two wanting beings 
Wrapped in a heated kiss  
And they conceal and shape 
In a room of scent 
Subtle senses
Stillness breathes 
Eyes gleam
Rapture
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Anish Avatar
November 7, 2008 at 7:59 PM
Nice sensual poem. Keep it up
Winter Avatar
October 31, 2008 at 5:19 AM
Oooh la la! Yes indeedy you captured the moment well! Love, Shar
Fawcett Avatar
October 31, 2008 at 12:24 AM
Excellent, excellent, excellent!! That is beautifully written and great use of the form. If you are entering it in John Heck's contest then Good Luck Laura. Love, Nigel
White Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 6:37 PM
what a steamy and romantic write, take care D-nyce
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 6:04 PM
So romantically beautiful, Laura! Blessings! Dorian
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