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Restless Legs Syndrome

My legs twitch In diabolical motion Sending waves Unintentionally Through my legs They are annoying Not painful per se But hurtful in another sense Keeping me awake During the night hours I jump when it happens Shock waves uncontrolled I frown by each wave Swearing at their ferocity They don’t stop I keep getting them A crazy twitch within Passing no comfort Through to me, ever Keeping me up All through the night With nothing but the twitch In my helpless legs Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 10:18:00 PM

I get this too. that's why I came to see this poem. Not as bad as you. not twitching,just irriatation, like the horrid ache in my back at this moment. What a day. I am getting off soon and relaxing on my bed!! I enjoyed this read a lot.

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/4/2011 5:54:00 PM

swearing the ferocity of diabolical motion... oh that restlessness! write on, russell! ~n

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2011 8:19:00 AM

i get these during long computer hours,russel.. vitamin B rich piece of work, wow..:) huggs, nette

Don Johnson

Date: 9/3/2011 7:12:00 PM

Twitchin bitchin bloody legs, pain in the mind the awful kind, ask it to stop, so sleeping mind, begone begone we begs... my sympathy mate:(

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 4:34:00 PM

Russell u described this health condition so perfection.. all aspects of it...luv... I am always swinging my legs to and fro but from exercising so very much when I do sit it is so automatic a gesture to let the legs flail...oh ...what will we do luv?

Jack Horne

Date: 9/3/2011 10:55:00 AM

It sounds very unpleasant, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2011 10:01:00 AM

That would be a horrible condition..At least now there is medicine for this illness...My grandson has inherited Huntington's Disease from his dad..There is not medicine or treatment no cure..Part of the illness is uncontrollable movements day and night seven days a week..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/3/2011 12:15:00 AM

Restless Leg Syndrome is very annoying--it's like unintentional karate kicks while u are trying to relax...Requip helps the patients where I work..talk with your doc. I like the short lines in this poem that lend to the inability to concentrate for great lengths of time bc of your RLS. ha ha. How fitting. Nice touch. GR