Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

Restless Flames

Vast parade of inferno charms
Hot savaged wavering flames' arms
Roaring restless like jealous hound.
Scintillating luster dance robs
Human beings, buildings and crops...
Blinding fervor burn, mess around
Annihilating, sparing none!
Embers blazing in scarlet stuns
Swaying to crack, screams, sobbing sounds!

(C) Olive Eloisa
11:34pm
June 13,2014

Contest: Light A Flame 
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Poetry Form: Novo Otto
Third Place.. :D!

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James Fraser September 30, 2014 at 4:59 PM Agitated flames soon to combust, flaming, not like metal, soon to rust. Love this piece Olive, James :)x Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 1, 2014 at 1:52 AM thanks much James.. :D

Silverla Stmichael June 24, 2014 at 3:06 PM Powerful. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 24, 2014 at 4:51 PM Thank you.. :) God bless you.. :)

Robert Lindley June 22, 2014 at 1:01 PM Congrats on a fine win!!!! Beautifully written my friend!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:34 AM Thank you Robert.. :)

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2014 at 6:26 PM Yours has that dramatic flair that nette loves. I can see how you won with this one, sweetie. BIG congrats for your win. A great entry. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:23 AM Thank you Andrea.. :) yours is great too. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 21, 2014 at 5:55 AM great one Olive ! congrats on a very wonderful deserved win ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:32 AM Thank you Dr. Upma.. :D yours is great too I have read it.. :D

Faye Gibson June 20, 2014 at 6:28 PM Liked this very much, Olive. Well deserved win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:29 AM Thank you FAye.. :D

Jan Allison June 20, 2014 at 3:10 PM just dropping by with my congratulations! hugs jan xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:26 AM thank you Jan.. :) hugs.. :)

Nette Onclaud June 20, 2014 at 2:58 PM emotional appeal and great flow of content-- check!.. cheers for the big win in my challenge, eloi.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:24 AM Thank you Nette.. :)

Paul Callus June 20, 2014 at 1:26 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi!! Your Novo Otto is a truly deserving winner! This was a great theme to write about; and you were very much inspired:) (see earlier comments) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:22 AM :) thank you Paul.. :) god bless you

Arlene Smith June 20, 2014 at 1:13 PM Congrats on a great win, Olive!!.. Incredible write!., hugs.. Arlene Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 21, 2014 at 11:56 AM Thank you Arlene..:)

Mohan Chutani June 20, 2014 at 12:04 PM Olive, congrats on your win for this lovely poem. Mohan Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 21, 2014 at 8:57 AM Thank you Mohan for the lovely comment..:)

Paul Callus June 14, 2014 at 7:13 PM OLive_eloi your determination to excel is praiseworthy. Wish most of my past students had been like you in class...willing, eager, learning with pleasure! Keep it up:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 15, 2014 at 9:51 AM :) it's my pleasure to learn PAul.. :) it is not to excel but it is to grow... :) Thank you very much.. :)

Susan Palli June 13, 2014 at 2:49 PM Could feel the fear! Good job Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 13, 2014 at 3:45 PM Thank you Susan for dropping by

Dr.Ram Mehta June 13, 2014 at 10:05 AM A fantastic, just fantastic with imagery and alliteration, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 13, 2014 at 3:45 PM thank you Sir.. GBU hope nothing like this will happen to us

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2014 at 9:24 AM gosh, you are just going to town on these challenges, Olive. I really admire how you take them on!! Great imagery in your roaring flames!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 13, 2014 at 3:35 PM :O?! yes Andrea.. I only tried this one again.. :O!? this a product of my experience and my dealings with patients.. and the usual news we see on tv. :O thank you for the drop by..:) Hope none like this will happen to us

Casarah Nance June 12, 2014 at 7:58 PM Wow! way to burn up the page with intense words. awesome chicky! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 13, 2014 at 3:30 PM Thank you Casarah for your intense comment.. :)

Tim Smith June 12, 2014 at 6:56 PM This is sizzling Olive...hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 13, 2014 at 2:52 PM Thank you Tim for your sizzling comment.. :)

Jan Allison June 12, 2014 at 5:47 PM Fabulous imagery, stunning rhyme good luck in the contest. hugs as ever Jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 13, 2014 at 3:24 PM Thank you Jan.. God bless you.. I wasn't actually inspired by this one rather I want to describe how it is when there is fire.. :( it's really frightening.. and ive seen one like this and been caring persons who suffered from burns..