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Resting Spirits

up on the hill where you can just about see heaven thats where a spirit goes when it's concious is guilty of sin the spirit rests till it's own will can see all things that were are and will ever be if I wait till the dawn rises the reflection will stare straight twords the soul untill God's will is there up twords the sunlight follows the brilliant suns glare back from the heavens with all new flare where there is an opalesence look to the new moon follow it's shadows in a monthly gracefull swoon peacefullness in it's patterns a place away from the suns doom Carry me there away from here resting in it's shadows here in my souls cocoon

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Date: 10/15/2013 5:32:00 PM
what a very interesting perspective on things. a nice and spiritual poem.
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:20:00 PM
to me it's floating in space and accepting that your the one thats there and after you float around somemore your still the one whos just floating around
Date: 10/7/2013 8:42:00 AM
Awesome to read something new from you!!! I love the sense of what, at first, seems like loneliness. But, it's not. It's a need for security & solace. At least, that's what I think. :) Wonderful job!
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:19:00 PM
Drake theres a point in life that a girl just has to accept what is and what isn't this poem expresses that for me

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