Resting

She lies, quietly reclining,
her flitting eyes  
beneath porcelain lids the only sign of life,
save for slight rise and fall of maiden breast.
But in her dream . . .
she soars beyond her narrow, provincial world
where tales recorded in approved books 
are her only adventures.
Moonbeams beckon,
luminous trails of stardust swirl
gilding the fluid pathway of her flight.
She wanders aloft, observing narrow streets,
foreign to her wide and planted avenues
where one walks protected, shielded 
from the rough venues of common life;
there dwell
the weak, the halt, the maimed, the depraved,
those whom poverty and cruelty have crushed
beneath ponderous feet abuse and hurt cleated,
seeing an encapsulated view captured by inner eyes
that sense her privileged world
has lost step with humanity.
Courage is conceived; resolve is awakened:
a Florence Nightingale is born.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, May 16, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/30/2014 11:53:00 PM
Faye, nice win, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:53:00 PM
FAYE, CONGRATULATIONS, enjoying your winning poem in Isaiah's DREAM paint contest.... hugs...Linda
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:49:00 PM
Faye: Congratulations. For all the sadness in the world you have woven a beautiful and optomistic ending. SuZ
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Date: 5/26/2014 2:52:00 PM
Dear Faye, Just like this dreamer, I often have dreams where I am looking down upon the Earth from some astral plane. How sad it is that this woman saw such terrible things, but that is the current state of affairs. Love the way you created her as a "Florence Nightingale." Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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