Balveen Cheema Poet Monoku

Rest In Aqua

Rest In Aqua




              broken and orphaned from my mountainous mother to rest in aqua






                                        21st February 2016
                             Contest: Monoku -7-on what you feel

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Vladislav Raven March 1, 2016 at 10:04 PM I have to apologise, i forgot tom put the seven rating in. There is your seven, well deserved. Balveen Cheema March 15, 2016 at 9:15 PM Thanks Raven! You are so kind!

Vladislav Raven March 1, 2016 at 10:02 PM Hi Balveen, a belated congratulations on your winning Monoku in the contest. Really liked this one. A Seven. Balveen Cheema March 15, 2016 at 9:15 PM A belated Thanks Raven!

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2016 at 5:07 PM wow, this is REALLY amazing for the one line and what it tells about the picture. it would have been higher on my own list! Congrats. Glad to finally see this one. Balveen Cheema February 27, 2016 at 7:47 PM Thanks Andrea! Wish you had judged! Love.....

Hansteven Selfa February 22, 2016 at 8:08 AM Congratulations Balveen on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans Balveen Cheema February 25, 2016 at 6:27 AM Thanks Hansteven!

Paul Callus February 22, 2016 at 5:59 AM Oh yes...this goes so well with the sponsor's prompt, Balveen....the serenity and calm are reflected in your words. Congratulations!! // paul Balveen Cheema February 25, 2016 at 6:28 AM Thanks for all your appreciation Paul!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 21, 2016 at 10:23 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Balveen.. Balveen Cheema February 22, 2016 at 12:29 AM Thanks Upma!

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 9:53 PM Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Balveen Cheema February 22, 2016 at 12:29 AM Thanks Linda!