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Rest Home Window

Sunset through the glass One window shade left open Letting me look out To watch the darkness coming And the fall of one more night

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/25/2016 7:11:00 AM

Very emotive and expressive work..Don't read too many from inside looking out..Thanks for stopping by..My contest is titled " Which Of The Four Would You Choose" if you still care to enter..It has moved up from the bottom of the page to less than half way..Sara

Richard Jordan
Date: 8/26/2016 2:55:00 PM

Thanks Sara. I appreciate your comment and follow up. I have been looking for a contest titled "Growing Old". Didn't look carefully enough! Guess that is also part of growing old.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2015 7:00:00 AM

mum is in a rest home - so I can relate to this poem on more than one level - great tanka:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2015 3:28:00 PM

:-) glad I inspired you as I too get inspired and helped by many lovley people here:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Jordan
Date: 6/1/2015 3:25:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. You may recall it was your Tanka "Goodby My Friend" that was the prompt for me to try to write my first Tanka. I have enjoyed the format since then. Thanks for the visit and continued support.