Kim Merryman Poet Tanka

Rest From the Storm

thunder storms cease
the sun peeks through gray clouds
brightening the day --
red-breasted robins gather
'round a rain filled puddle.

3/22/12
For Susan Burch's Any one new or 2 yr old Tanka contest

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Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2012 at 10:37 PM KIM , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 2, 2012 at 10:22 AM congrats Kim on a lovely win for these awesome words of visual delight luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown April 2, 2012 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Kim. Love, Carol

Sandy Ivy D March 29, 2012 at 8:32 PM nice

Kash Poet March 24, 2012 at 1:29 PM Excellent imagery here Kim.Love it.Thanks for visiting my page.

Nette Onclaud March 24, 2012 at 1:24 PM charming tanka that delights the senses, kim.. well done!.. best of luck with huggs! :)

Joann Grisetti March 23, 2012 at 6:14 PM Good jobon thei tanka, and best of luck in the contest. haven't seen many robins lately, will have to be sure to look for them.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2012 at 3:14 PM Well done Kim, luck to you in contest. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

Marty Owens March 23, 2012 at 10:17 AM Very nice Tanka...good luck in the contest...Thanks for the nice comments...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown March 23, 2012 at 7:37 AM Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol