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Rest Day For a Fighter

. . . …. ….. . . He lays his head on grass, breathing the sky A rhapsody of hues trumpets rest day. Blue Mountains, a lush parade like sun’s dye Sweeping over hills wafting minted spray, A mantle of fog drapes wedge peas up high, While bobs roam in a space of home’s fresh ray. Here, a man holds a gaze from wetlands call, Inhaling lyrebird songs as wind chimes toll Riding on colt, hooves paddle the creek floor But clear peace is disturbed by crackling sounds While magpies burst from trees, ready to soar The air smells of smoke, the man quickens few rounds; Scenes of Katoomba flames thump in mind’s core Reminded by the burnt spread on forest mounds. A pledge of honor to guard range of Oz Is his code to keep wildlife from wrath’s cross Amazed, wombats loudly screech on a hole Teasing gums to play as they blow gray mist A choir of mixed notes rattling like popped coal The gorge answers with a lyrical twist, Firefighter grins with joy in his soul Winding sweet hours cradled and dusk-kissed. Clouds caress his ride, graced by Mountain cruise All is safe through music of the bush (c) . ……… . . *In 2011, Blue Mountains (in Katoomba town) was threatened by a wild blaze that was eased and controlled by a hundred brave fire fighters of Australia. This is dedicated to the 100 rescuers who saved this region listed as a World Heritage Area by UNESCO. A pleasure to have visited this wonder a few years ago. Tracie Edwards’ A Lil' Bit of Aus Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/8/2012 3:24:00 PM
Lot's stuff here wow, I had no idea?Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/5/2012 10:07:00 PM
Congrats on another well-deserved win! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:26:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on a spectacular second place win for tremendous lines of Aussie Land from photo ...
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Date: 3/5/2012 4:13:00 PM
Awesome piece, Nette.Congrats on your superb write....
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Date: 3/5/2012 1:00:00 PM
Congratualtions on your win in Tracie's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:56:00 AM
Nette Congrats on your win.This is a wonderful poem.
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations nette this is a lovely piece, you have caught it so well with these words xx
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:49:00 AM
Love love loved it Nette..congrats on your 2nd place win xxxxx Hugs
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:59:00 PM
wow, you put a lot of work into that Aus Challenge. YOu put me to shame with my simple little tanka! so you are gearing up for tonight? Joe needs me to drive a long way to go see him while he is stopped in his semi tonight (not allowed to drive more than a certain number of hours per day) I will have to watch it all back on DVR. I have no favorite movie this year as in years past. Clooney is the darling of Hollywood but I dont' think he deserves it this year. wish we could DISH oscars!
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:33:00 AM
A great tribute to these brave folks, my dad was a firefighter and it is a dangerous and oft times unappreciated field. Great poetry as well here Miss Nette with vibrant imagery as always.
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:05:00 AM
awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!! gr8 write.. enjoyed it ...~sashi
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Date: 2/25/2012 7:16:00 PM
Reads like a winner for Tracie's contest..I just loved the picture that she posted to go with the contest..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2012 3:18:00 PM
A pleasure to reading yours poem...always nette. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/25/2012 2:46:00 PM
Nice entry that will sure bring smiles to Tracie. Luv n hugs Michael
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Date: 2/25/2012 1:08:00 PM
A wonderful dedication to our brave firefighters all over the world. I am amazed at how they come together from all over when there is a fire or disaster of great magnitude. I enjoyed reading your poem today. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/25/2012 12:44:00 PM
Another amazing write from you Nette.Love it!Best wishes.
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Date: 2/25/2012 12:45:00 PM
It's 1 :15 AM.
Date: 2/25/2012 12:41:00 PM
Wow...this is marvelous. What a sweet dedication to dedicated men and women who put their lives on the line. Thanks for being a faithful follower of my works. Means so much to me !!!
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