Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Response To Shattered Glass

I found a beautiful shattered heart
Floating out in space
I gathered all the pieces
It's sadness to erase

Each piece was filled with love
That was the glue I used
How could this thing of beauty
Have been so abused

Once it was reconstructed
Each part perfectly placed
I prayed to my Father
To have the scars erased

Now it has been retuned
Healed and so much lighter
Filled with the Love of God
It now shines even brighter

Dedicated to Elizabeth O'Driscoll, after reading her poem "Shattered Glass". Please take time to read her Poem, it is beautifully written.

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Casarah Nance July 13, 2014 at 4:45 PM Oh wow that is beautiful! I love that image, it is now art in my heart. :) Richard Lamoureux July 14, 2014 at 9:10 AM Thanks Casarah, I appreciate your response.

Laura Street November 8, 2012 at 2:45 AM This is beautiful :) amazing to see ideas bouncing off each other, pure synergy and beautiful energy of healing.

Joseph May November 5, 2012 at 8:11 AM ...nicely penned Richard....love is the glue that holds the universe together... Richard Lamoureux November 5, 2012 at 8:41 AM I would agree especially when we learn that God is Love. Thanks for reading and commenting. Be sure to read Elizabeth's poem.

Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 4, 2012 at 7:34 PM Beautiful poem Richard, thank you, my heart feels much better now, apart from a few leaks:) but the glue most likely hasn't set yet : ) just kidding, this is really lovely, love elizabeth Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2012 at 11:27 PM I like a woman with a sense of humor. You are most welcome. Have a good night.

Jack Ellison November 4, 2012 at 3:29 PM Very clever, very creatively written Richard! Kudos! I will read Elizabeth's poem! Cheers from the East, Jack Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2012 at 5:39 PM You will enjoy it.