Response To Potpourri

Response to potpourri





Death, beginning new life in zing,
Twilight of dusk veiled by darkness,
For night's rest after long conquest,
Unfolds into morning sunrise.






Written Jan 19th, 2016
For "A poetic response" poetry contest by nette
Inspired by quote 4 by Rabindranath Tagore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 7:28 PM
this was very nice. ONe I missed. And glad I finally saw it.
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 1:20 PM
LOVE "BEGIN NEW LIFE IN ZING"
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 3:54 PM
You look at death with a positive attitude, Upma. Afterlife has a lot to do with it. gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:29 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful comments n wishes Paul.. always a delight to see u on my page.
Hy Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Very true... Good luck with the contest. Hugs, Rahy
A. Sharma Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:30 AM
Thanks a lot Rahy..
Godwin Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 5:34 AM
I love this, it is surely a winner. Just perfect ... CayCay
A. Sharma Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:30 AM
Thanks for ur lovely wishes Caycay..
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