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Response To Potpourri

Her mood changes, I’ll never guess But, she’s the breath that soothes time’s ache--- Mildly rambling,my fond words bring A love nurtured through season’s test. 19 January 2016 Contest of nette onclaud: Response To Potpourri “People forget that marriage is art, So it should be refreshed every day.” Quote 3

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Date: 10/5/2016 4:39:00 PM
In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2016 1:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem Franco. A 7.
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Date: 1/31/2016 9:50:00 PM
franco, Congrats on your POETIC RESPONSE win. Luv - Linda -
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Date: 1/27/2016 12:51:00 PM
You sure know mars from venus, mate! Congratulations !
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:21:00 AM
Well done, Franco! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/25/2016 9:59:00 AM
An excellent take on this theme, Franco; quite unique! ~ Congratulations on placing first. // paul
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Date: 1/25/2016 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot!
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Date: 1/24/2016 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful, Franco; a well deserved top placement.
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Date: 1/23/2016 7:19:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved placement, Franco!
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Date: 1/22/2016 7:23:00 PM
Franco,, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT **
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Date: 1/22/2016 2:48:00 PM
very original take on the theme and it's entire mood/ phrasing just flows, franco.. big congrats and thanks for being part of my contest...huggs
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Date: 1/18/2016 10:53:00 PM
perfectly penned POtpourri.........
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Date: 1/18/2016 5:13:00 PM
"breath that soothes times ache" very eloquent, Franco.
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Date: 1/18/2016 1:43:00 PM
Moods! You know women well and treat them with sweet devotion. Excellent poetry for wifey and contest! Warm wishes to you!
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