Franco Gonza Poet Verse

Response To Potpourri

Her mood changes, I’ll never guess
But, she’s the breath that soothes time’s ache---
Mildly rambling,my fond words bring
A love nurtured through season’s test.


19 January 2016
Contest of nette onclaud: Response To Potpourri
“People forget that marriage is art,
So it should be refreshed every day.” Quote 3

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Sara Kendrick October 5, 2016 at 4:39 PM In < ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores June 29, 2016 at 1:54 PM Beautiful poem Franco. A 7.

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 9:50 PM franco, Congrats on your POETIC RESPONSE win. Luv - Linda -

Manny Paras January 27, 2016 at 12:51 PM You sure know mars from venus, mate! Congratulations !

Kim Merryman January 26, 2016 at 11:21 AM Well done, Franco! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Paul Callus January 25, 2016 at 9:59 AM An excellent take on this theme, Franco; quite unique! ~ Congratulations on placing first. // paul

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2016 at 9:49 AM Congratulations on your top spot!

Faye Gibson January 24, 2016 at 3:35 PM Beautiful, Franco; a well deserved top placement.

Balveen Cheema January 23, 2016 at 7:19 PM Congrats on your well deserved placement, Franco!

Skat A January 22, 2016 at 7:23 PM Franco,, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT **

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2016 at 2:48 PM very original take on the theme and it's entire mood/ phrasing just flows, franco.. big congrats and thanks for being part of my contest...huggs

Archana Garg January 18, 2016 at 10:53 PM perfectly penned POtpourri.........

Daniel Turner January 18, 2016 at 5:13 PM "breath that soothes times ache" very eloquent, Franco.

Rhoma Em January 18, 2016 at 1:43 PM Moods! You know women well and treat them with sweet devotion. Excellent poetry for wifey and contest! Warm wishes to you!