Response To Potpourri

Horizons bright in tints of flight
beam welcoming rays, breaking free;
excitement springs at lifting wings--
celestial metamorphosis

Copyright, January 17, 2016
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 31, 2016 at 9:54 PM
Congrats on your POETIC RESPONSE win. Luv - Linda -
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January 26, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Beautiful imagery and unique depiction of the quote! Congrats on your placement, Faye! Love, Kim
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January 25, 2016 at 9:50 AM
This is very beautiful, Faye! You make death sound like something to look forward to. Love that 'celestial metamorphosis'. ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win. ~ Regards // paul
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January 25, 2016 at 2:49 AM
lovely write Faye.............. congratulations..
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January 24, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Exquisitely lovely with beautiful imagery! Love it! Congratulations, dear Faye, on a wonderful win in this contest! Best regards. Pandita
Cheema Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 7:23 PM
Faye, Congrats on your well deserved placement!
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January 22, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Faye, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT **
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January 22, 2016 at 3:29 PM
a glorious perspective on death, faye... sweet congrats and thanks for being part of my contest.. huggs
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January 18, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Very pretty ... CayCay
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