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Hi Soupers, I had no clue how to write for this contest:-) Enjoy:-) Alexis
If I could make you see that I am finally ready to love I would. What you perceived as hate was me protecting my shattered heart. If I could take back all the times I hurt you and made you feel unloved I would. It was not that I didn't want to love you, I didn't know how to love. If I could I perform surgery on your broken heart, I would give you a brand new heart. All the times that I said I loved you , I desperately wanted it to be true. If I could I make you see that person I am today loves only you, I would. Inspired by The Response to “If” Contest Sponsor:Silent One

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Date: 10/29/2018 3:18:00 PM
Your "if" is far greater than certain... I loved them.
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Date: 10/29/2018 12:58:00 PM
Such loving sentiments in your charming, caring words. A delightful read Alexis. My best for a win in the contest.
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Date: 10/29/2018 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful my friend. This one obviously came straight from your heart. Best of luck in the contest
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