Response Less Spoken

I saw you
but you wasn't walking in the rain
i wish you was holding my hand but i would truly never be the same
the light lit ya face as you spoke ya name
 Jeru which equates to the fact that you are
Just Every Rainfalls Utopia
like the rainbow's end mixing my emotions in the leprechauns pot of fools gold
lucky 7 as you describe ya Aquarian tone
i got stuck like ya view was in the buff
but you was on the mic when i fell in love
i felt like you could wrap me up in love for days
till the cops come knocking
and we could get strung out on poetic vibes
falling asleep and waking up again to finish the scene
only this time it would be more scream as we get deeper into "things"
the space gets smaller and we haven't even kissed
the beat gets louder but there is no drummer or guitarist
you got me cornered just so you can see the tremor in my lips
my opening statement is "King  I am the Queen unlock the chamber to what's behind my left tit"
I am your trophy Statue of Liberty I will forever keep ya path lit
i zoom out and realize you haven't even left the stage
yet we've been to the Garden of Eden and the most uniquest love was made
haven't touched you in too many days
when you gonna let me push up on you and give you some...braids?
i could run my fingas through ya hair until your nature becomes raised
this is not the final chapter this is just one page

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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