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Respect, Not Attention

Today he will award himself, 
Today he will pretend achieve, 
Today will be the best ever day, 
Thinking others will believe,

His attention seeking, complaining, 
Pity-me Facebook page,
Will be accepted by the thousands, 
Following his life on stage,

But, deep down, he knows he doesn’t 
Really know these friends on line,
And what he wants is just their “likes”, 
To trigger his dopamine,

“Like” alcohol, “like” heroine,
Like all drugs fire in people’s heads,
When what he could be doing, 
Is seeking a respectful life instead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Tripp Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Ohhhh...I absolutely abhor Facebook. It should have been named "Fakebook". Great write, Lewis.
Gauthier Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Love the level of subtlety though your message is so very obvious. Great delivery, Lewis.
Raynes Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Thank you Line, i enjoy writing in a rather simple style, allows me to write about bigger issues :)
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