Resounding Connection

I was dying of thirst for a love that would saturate me in affection-   
        now you quench me with warmth; we have a resounding connection. 



34 syllables 
When One Line is Not Enough Contest
Silent One
June 1, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Laura.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 2:44 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. Great words .. resounding connection.
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:05 AM
many thanks sweet Subimal :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Great verse, Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:05 AM
thank you lovely Eve :)-luloo
Gentry Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Congratulations on your win with these romantic two lines.
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:05 AM
many thanks sweet Susan :)-luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:22 AM
May you be drenched with a romantic waterfall! Congrats, dear Luloo!
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:04 AM
many thanks lovely Kim :)-luloo
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 8:11 AM
- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:04 AM
thank you sweet Sunshine :)-luloo
George   Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 7:10 AM
A two line masterpiece, Laura... Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:04 AM
thank you sweet Elaine :)-luloo
One Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Sounds like a great connection Laura.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:04 AM
thank you dear Poet for my placement! :)-lulooo
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