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RESISTING the romance stirring the horses stampeding warm sands kiss the nights in rodanthe* whisper of blue hearts angry hurting eyes open wide see you as the storm hits its precipice letting fingers slide past falls away and the wise waves dance swaying with grief drawing close all the love you can embrace in a memory box carved from a twisted limb the suffering of a wooden cross did you forget, he saw you looked upon your tears ...your fears all your years ...your loss he saw you at the beginning ...at the end driftwood healed ...purified gold 7/11/2017 free verse *Poem inspired by movie ‘Nights In Rodanthe’

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Date: 7/12/2017 9:15:00 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:06:00 PM
I've seen this film, and it is captured perfectly with the same melancholy emotions of the tragic end. I loved the movie and the poem :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 7/11/2017 11:39:00 AM
This wonderful poem has a solemn feel to it, at least to me. It bridges time and leaves the reader (me) wanting more Really nice Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris!

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