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I gave to sorrow all I had, all my sadness and trembling grief and then- I accepted my fate, with resignation. Heart-wrung with tears, I have found outlets for the pain, writing, dancing are now my loves, I detached from passivity. I am resigned to my reality, to the letting go of loving hearts, so it is for all of eternity, and today, I dance. I put everything there, all my emotions I surrender, relinquish tears are falling down and I collapse, and then- the music ends. _________________________ September 29, 2016 Poetry/Anisometric Verse/Resignation Copyright Protected ID-16-834-391-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Resignation sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron First Place

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Date: 10/12/2016 2:12:00 PM
Wonderful last line.
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Date: 10/11/2016 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 9/30/2016 4:00:00 AM
Oh, I love this one, Constance :) so sad in its loveliness:) the ending is perfect:)
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Date: 9/29/2016 4:49:00 PM
Beautiful write, Constance,, good luck in the contest!
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