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Resignation

pond geese are leaving
for places I long to go….

warm breath on cold hands


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Contest: Traditional Haiku
Sponsor: Catie Lindsay
9/20/16

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

September 25, 2016 at 12:24 AM

Smart Geese, I bet they are flying over my head right now. South Texas is the place to be. Enjoyed. LINDA

September 24, 2016 at 12:59 PM

Perfect read since I just noticed how many, here, I have always followed... seem to have left...

September 21, 2016 at 9:38 AM

Excellent, Mrs Carrie. I too want to go!

Beautiful Scars

September 21, 2016 at 7:49 AM

Carrie- wonderful haiku...good luck :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

September 21, 2016 at 5:34 AM

Good visual, I'm not that up on Haiku's, but this captures the essence of one perfectly....ian

Constance La France

September 20, 2016 at 9:45 PM

Carrie, this is wonderful, you painted a picture in a few words ~

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