Residue of You



Sitting in front of the fireplace,
thinking melancholy thoughts ...
brooding, dark contemplate
Lonely heat I feel from the flame,
I hear the fire whispering your name
Memories shimmering in the blazing light;
days of pure happiness, nights of sheer delight
I see your smiling face so clear in the flame
Sparkling is your eyes,
dazzling is your silence
As cold darkness covers the room,
wilted joy never to again bloom
I see our love dying in the flame
Dazzling is your lips,
sparkling is your silence
No words said as you’re leaving ...
Diamond grief hardens me,
and the love we knew turns into ashes
Residue of you remains in my heart
Diamonds don’t melt in the fire,
sapphires don’t burn in the flame
In my heart is branded your name
Ice don’t melt in the fire,
diamonds don’t burn in the flame
My life is now empty carbon ashes
Desires don’t melt in the fire,
sapphires don’t burn in the flame
Residue of you is tears of sad ashes
Ice don’t melt in the fire,
diamonds don’t burn in the flame
Residue of you is ashes in an urn
Diamonds glow in the fire,
sapphires sparkle in the flame
Residue of you is a burnt paper with my name,
Diamonds don’t melt in the fire,
sapphires don’t burn in the flame
Still in my broken heart is mended your name
Diamonds glow in the fire,
sapphires sparkle in the flame
Residue of you is loving ashes fire forgiven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/20/2017 8:39:00 AM
Hello Freddie, I find this poem full of emotions happiness, sadness and heart ache. Have a nice day my friend Love And Peace and Joy.
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Date: 9/2/2017 4:25:00 PM
This is wonderfully wonderful
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Date: 8/30/2017 5:08:00 PM
I like those two lines about the diamonds and the sapphires. Yesterday it was love found and today it is love lost, both of which were talented writes.
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Date: 8/30/2017 1:12:00 AM
Sad poem but beautifully penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/29/2017 10:46:00 AM
Another incredible poem. A favorite this is. Very well written Freddie ! :)
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Date: 8/29/2017 9:38:00 AM
Wow! Freddie, What a sad yet beautiful piece on looking back on what once was. You captured that feeling very well. Your repetition of various lines made this well written piece more impactful. Excellent job my talented friend- Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 8/29/2017 10:29:00 AM
Ty, Alexis. Your comments are so good to hear from my dear friend. Love and peace.
Date: 8/29/2017 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful pen Freddie. I love the precious gems not succumb to flame. xomo
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 8/29/2017 10:19:00 AM
Ty, Maureen. You are spot on w/your comments. His love for her can't succumb to the flame. Love always.
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