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Residue of You

Sitting in front of the fireplace, thinking melancholy thoughts ... brooding, dark contemplate Lonely heat I feel from the flame, I hear the fire whispering your name Memories shimmering in the blazing light; days of pure happiness, nights of sheer delight I see your smiling face so clear in the flame Sparkling is your eyes, dazzling is your silence As cold darkness covers the room, wilted joy never to again bloom I see our love dying in the flame Dazzling is your lips, sparkling is your silence No words said as you’re leaving ... Diamond grief hardens me, and the love we knew turns into ashes Residue of you remains in my heart Diamonds don’t melt in the fire, sapphires don’t burn in the flame In my heart is branded your name Ice don’t melt in the fire, diamonds don’t burn in the flame My life is now empty carbon ashes Desires don’t melt in the fire, sapphires don’t burn in the flame Residue of you is tears of sad ashes Ice don’t melt in the fire, diamonds don’t burn in the flame Residue of you is ashes in an urn Diamonds glow in the fire, sapphires sparkle in the flame Residue of you is a burnt paper with my name, Diamonds don’t melt in the fire, sapphires don’t burn in the flame Still in my broken heart is mended your name Diamonds glow in the fire, sapphires sparkle in the flame Residue of you is loving ashes fire forgiven

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Date: 9/20/2017 8:39:00 AM
Hello Freddie, I find this poem full of emotions happiness, sadness and heart ache. Have a nice day my friend Love And Peace and Joy.
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Date: 9/2/2017 4:25:00 PM
This is wonderfully wonderful
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Date: 8/30/2017 5:08:00 PM
I like those two lines about the diamonds and the sapphires. Yesterday it was love found and today it is love lost, both of which were talented writes.
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Date: 8/30/2017 1:12:00 AM
Sad poem but beautifully penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/29/2017 10:46:00 AM
Another incredible poem. A favorite this is. Very well written Freddie ! :)
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Date: 8/29/2017 9:38:00 AM
Wow! Freddie, What a sad yet beautiful piece on looking back on what once was. You captured that feeling very well. Your repetition of various lines made this well written piece more impactful. Excellent job my talented friend- Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 8/29/2017 10:29:00 AM
Ty, Alexis. Your comments are so good to hear from my dear friend. Love and peace.
Date: 8/29/2017 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful pen Freddie. I love the precious gems not succumb to flame. xomo
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 8/29/2017 10:19:00 AM
Ty, Maureen. You are spot on w/your comments. His love for her can't succumb to the flame. Love always.

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