Rescued

I wander in a fog

                                             Adrift upon the sea

                                       Hope flickers from the shore

                                         And guides me to True light

                                          The Master calls me home.




   





Written on 7/9/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Awesome pen Laura! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!
Leiser Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. I appreciate you stopping by with your kind words :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 7:05 PM
great pen Laura congrats hugs
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Thank you very much, Shadow! I'm always happy when you like me poetry :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 6:06 PM
This is wonderful to envision Laura. Congratulations o. your win!
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Thank you, Connie! Your kindness and encouragement means a lot to me :)
Carter Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 5:33 PM
So pretty Laura I love the imagery congrats on your win ~lee
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Thank you, Lee, for your kind and encouraging words :)
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your kind words :)
A  Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Laura, congrats on your win. SKAT
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Thank you, Skat! You are always so thoughtful and kind with your constant encouragement. I really do appreciate it :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 11:06 AM
a sweet and inspirational one I see here! Glad for your win!
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. You are ever so kind and thoughtful :)
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your win, wonderful write. Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Thank you, Eve! I appreciate your thoughtfulness :)
Sergi Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 6:51 AM
i enjoyed the tranquility of your poem, Laura, great write
Leiser Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Thanks, Ralph. I appreciate your kind words :)
Crenshaw Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 9:37 PM
I like!!!
Leiser Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Thanks, Kelly :)
Christian Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 2:56 PM
lovely poem good luck with the contest
Leiser Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Thank you, Diane. Your kind words encourage me :)
Fleming Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 2:29 PM
Arouses conflicting feelings. A strange ambiguous mix of godliness and sensuality...very peculiar! Nicely done, Laura! My very best regards!! :) john
Leiser Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 2:36 PM
I'm glad you liked my poem, John. Not sure what is sensual about it, but if you think so, that's fine with me!
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 2:16 PM
beautifully spiritual - good luck in the contest I feel this will do well:-) hugs jan xx 7
Leiser Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Thank you, Jan. I'm glad you liked it :)
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