Rescued

I wander in a fog Adrift upon the sea Hope flickers from the shore And guides me to True light The Master calls me home. Written on 7/9/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2015 12:10:00 AM

Awesome pen Laura! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/30/2015 2:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. I appreciate you stopping by with your kind words :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/25/2015 7:05:00 PM

great pen Laura congrats hugs

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2015 4:34:00 PM

Thank you very much, Shadow! I'm always happy when you like me poetry :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2015 6:06:00 PM

This is wonderful to envision Laura. Congratulations o. your win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2015 4:33:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! Your kindness and encouragement means a lot to me :)

Lee Carter

Date: 7/25/2015 5:33:00 PM

So pretty Laura I love the imagery congrats on your win ~lee

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2015 4:32:00 PM

Thank you, Lee, for your kind and encouraging words :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2015 5:10:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2015 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, for your kind words :)

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2015 3:17:00 PM

Laura, congrats on your win. SKAT

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2015 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Skat! You are always so thoughtful and kind with your constant encouragement. I really do appreciate it :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2015 11:06:00 AM

a sweet and inspirational one I see here! Glad for your win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. You are ever so kind and thoughtful :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/25/2015 10:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, wonderful write. Hugs Eve

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Eve! I appreciate your thoughtfulness :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/22/2015 6:51:00 AM

i enjoyed the tranquility of your poem, Laura, great write

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2015 4:28:00 PM

Thanks, Ralph. I appreciate your kind words :)

Kelly Crenshaw

Date: 7/10/2015 9:37:00 PM

I like!!!

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/10/2015 10:38:00 PM

Thanks, Kelly :)

Diane Christian

Date: 7/9/2015 2:56:00 PM

lovely poem good luck with the contest

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/9/2015 5:10:00 PM

Thank you, Diane. Your kind words encourage me :)

John Fleming

Date: 7/9/2015 2:29:00 PM

Arouses conflicting feelings. A strange ambiguous mix of godliness and sensuality...very peculiar! Nicely done, Laura! My very best regards!! :) john

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/9/2015 2:36:00 PM

I'm glad you liked my poem, John. Not sure what is sensual about it, but if you think so, that's fine with me!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2015 2:16:00 PM

beautifully spiritual - good luck in the contest I feel this will do well:-) hugs jan xx 7

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/9/2015 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. I'm glad you liked it :)