Re:Runs

sick of spit and regurgitated goop ~ best to avoid bird’s nest soup 


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David Kavanagh

allusionrepetitionsickmonoku

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Anne E Sangster - K

May 1, 2022 at 9:11 AM

Hi David, I'm glad I read your "re-runs." I needed a a good laugh today. Keep em coming! We all need more laughter in our lives. :-D Cheers Anne :-)

David Kavanagh

May 1, 2022 at 9:24 AM

I’m delighted you see through my dark humour Anne, and can still get a laugh, we certainly do need more laughter, I would probably be lynched in China for writing this monoku, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

April 19, 2022 at 3:48 PM

hahaha.

David Kavanagh

April 19, 2022 at 4:05 PM

It’s nasty stuff Andrea on paper anyway

Christopher Flaherty

April 19, 2022 at 12:32 PM

Birds of a feather

Christopher Flaherty

April 20, 2022 at 3:27 PM

Yes I think I got it fella 1st time round but I don't want to put my words to your thoughts. And as you say you have to be subtle for rear to offend the fickle

David Kavanagh

April 19, 2022 at 1:48 PM

Perhaps Christopher, you see a little deeper into this one, I always like to put a little extra in the pot, cheers David

Jennifer Proxenos

April 19, 2022 at 11:02 AM

Oh wow, imagine being tortured and made to eat this soup - horrors! Had quite a laugh with this, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer

David Kavanagh

April 19, 2022 at 12:01 PM

I know Jennifer it’s terrible stuff! but apparently worth its weight in gold, they cannot get enough of it in China, I was laughing myself writing this one, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

April 19, 2022 at 4:37 AM

Think I'll pass and stick with fish and chips lol. Greetings from Turkey David. Tom

David Kavanagh

April 19, 2022 at 4:48 AM

Yeah can’t go far wrong with the old one and one, perhaps a little marmite on the side, enjoy the sun cheers David

Anselmo Boles

April 18, 2022 at 6:51 PM

A good warning, worth re: thinking! Thanks for the advice. Nice...ab ** I miss hanging out inside Trinity college in Dublin. Cheers David!**

David Kavanagh

April 19, 2022 at 12:32 AM

You’ll be missing the Trinity ball so Anselmo, it’s on this Friday night, ah well! but do steer clear of the bird nest soup it will eat into your wallet too, cheers David