Requiem of a Phoenix

 Requiem of a Phoenix 

Silhouettes and storm clouds loom, 
etched against a blackened sky
by bolts of electric blue
and ashen moon rays.
I mourn at dusk; the death of the light. 

Languid flames dance 
from tree to tree, 
as a passing of the torch
to the sacrificial pyre. 
I mourn by fire; the death of the light.

A tormented world in anguish
heaves a guttural howl, 
which resonates through the darkness
carving deep channels in tangible silence.
I mourn in song; the death of the light.

Absently numb, I view it all
with a looming realization
that I was never made for this world
captive to flesh and desolation.
I mourn alone; the death of the light. 

I surrender to my captivity. 
I surrender to the agony.
I surrender to the storm and fire.

I embrace the void.

From the cinders of night
skyward I strain on bolts of electric blue
pursuing the tranquility of the moonlight.
Unqualified freedom granted by absolute loss
is a new captivity. 

So mourn I at daybreak, the death of the night. 

4/14/17

For Contest: Mythical Creatures
Hosted by: Julia Ward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/22/2020 5:24:00 PM
I am so very pleased to have found this great poem my friend. It certainly rings out in today's looming dark and getting ever darker world. A true gem and a fav too.. God bless..
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Date: 5/23/2017 12:10:00 PM
A fascinating mythical bird you have so adeptly written about. Symbolizes reborn idealism and hope. Outstanding imagery, interesting scene and scenario. A fav for me! I will send to myself, now that I am finally rid of the hackers and have changed my email address.:)) Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 4/15/2017 12:43:00 AM
Powerful!
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