Requesting in-kind

If only creation conceived of her sooner Another name for the Moon might not be lunar Silken charcoal casts an image upon this sheet Artistry, as this commission found, is so complete An evolutionary masterpiece lacking nothing nor insipid To touch beauty such as this is so euphorically intrepid Were I given by a djinn wishes thrice I would invest two in kissing she once, then twice The third; if only for a moment, requesting in-kind If somewhere within her; my Valentine, she'd find
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hind Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 1:54 PM
Sweet, reminds me of an angel. Beautiful writing, I absolutely loved the three wishes thing, and the romance of a third kiss in-kind. Perfect trust? Beautiful writing from a beautiful soul.
Scorpio Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 5:18 PM
I would say perfect trust is a very good amicable description of what I was feeling when I wrote this poem. Very intuitive of you! Fondly A.S.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace