Reptile

My mind 
Slow
Reptilian 
Today
What I am

Light 
Inch forward
Survival 

Only now
No tomorrow
Nothing
To think

depressionfree verse

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James Byrd

February 12, 2009 at 7:28 PM

A powerful catch on the primitive. Beautiful. One of my disciplines is biology, and I rejoyce when art and science blend.

Daver Austin

January 30, 2009 at 6:48 AM

Corinne, this is great! How good to find a real poet...ummm, poetess? As regards Artemis...I could care less what your sexual preference is. all I know is I want to communicate with someone having sensitivity and intelligence. The poem is out of a chap book of mine..."The Sibyl," is strictly a point of view, not a condemnation. Love, daver