Reptile

My mind Slow Reptilian Today What I am Light Inch forward Survival Only now No tomorrow Nothing To think

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James Byrd

Date: 2/12/2009 7:28:00 PM

A powerful catch on the primitive. Beautiful. One of my disciplines is biology, and I rejoyce when art and science blend.

Daver Austin

Date: 1/30/2009 6:48:00 AM

Corinne, this is great! How good to find a real poet...ummm, poetess? As regards Artemis...I could care less what your sexual preference is. all I know is I want to communicate with someone having sensitivity and intelligence. The poem is out of a chap book of mine..."The Sibyl," is strictly a point of view, not a condemnation. Love, daver

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/30/2009 6:26:00 AM

The feelings within are clear and the title suits the contents so very well making for a very good write. Michael

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/30/2009 6:19:00 AM

I love the title very much. The poem works very well..I enjoyed this read. Thank you.