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Repping my poetry

Various haters, wishing upon me, no success, I visualize the opposite, in a blessed narrative as I speak, With ill skill, repping my poetry, massive success I seek, Writings for miles, mindful thoughts I keep, no need to be tweaked, Foreseeing you retreat back to your TV and couch, so take a seat, My style will defeat you with high temperatures of heat! Left my throne, thrown from above the clouds, my lyrics are sound, Reunited and bound to Sacred Ancient Formula’s, Coming to destroy ya, uncovering divisions, under a hidden layer, Ancient knowledge comprehended in vivid visions, No divisions, Creative energy in fine intellectual human form and living, Reincarnated from the distant past from an empire shattered and torn, Brought fourth to this present time, ready get set, my job is to inform, My thoughts are powerful like a violent category five storm, Bringing a plague of locusts, ready to swarm, we go large! Mighty men of old we stand tall and take charge! Living in a world with technology, information on supercharge, Prophesied in scriptures, we have been told, Heard by a few, not distracted by gold, unfolding the deceit, My feet grounded, founded upon a solid structure, About to rupture, on the earth I walk upon, But this society functions wrong, I run from decay, Monday to Friday, eight to five, fries my mind as I feel I need to hide, But I’m sweet, as I meet those chosen, My thoughts have risen, dodge collisions, Giving wisdom to make decisions, My mission is long, Learning from when I do wrong, Mindful in a sick world I feel I don’t belong, A strong sacred keeper of my word, Not too worried if it’s not heard, I’m a bird at flight, At great height, Narrative’s with insight, Here to provoke you, Stoke the fire within you!

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Date: 10/13/2016 2:40:00 AM
Sucks ya in really goes well with the title from beggining to end keeps that repping my poetry emphisis and gets better and better.
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Quincy Mac
Date: 10/13/2016 3:07:00 AM
Thank you bro, I'm going to check more of your writing out, its deep .
Date: 12/19/2015 6:58:00 PM
QUINCY:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 12/23/2015 9:13:00 PM
Thank you SKAT_A, I appreciate your comment. Right back at you, have a blessed time :) Quincy Mac
Date: 11/23/2015 12:07:00 PM
- A great first poem, I look forward to become more familiar with your poems in the future - Welcome to " the soup" Quincy Mac ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2015 3:29:00 PM
Kia Ora (Greetings) Thank you for taking the time to read one of my pieces and for the warm welcome to "the soup". Much appreciated. Aroha, Quincy Mac
Date: 11/21/2015 12:45:00 PM
Good morning Quincy, I will start here. Enjoy your first poem on poetry soup for a second time. A well-written poem, grounded from top to bottom. I hope you stick to your words and provoke us with your rep poems. Soon, I will learn your formula. JK... :) Love LINDA
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Quincy Mac
Date: 11/21/2015 8:40:00 PM
This has been quite a treat replying to all the comments I am getting :) Thank you Linda. I always stick to my words, Here to provoke and stoke the flames within fellow poets. I learn this formula from observing real freestyle rap battles, top of the head words into verse's dispersing knowledge without rehearsing. Influenced by that real underground 90's kind of Hiphop. Aroha, Quincy Mac
Date: 11/20/2015 11:41:00 PM
Hi Quincy, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:31:00 AM
Kia Ora (Greetings) Pandita, Thank you for your warm welcome and I appreciate your comments about "Repping my poetry". I will keep posting as long as others want to read them. I'm going to check out one of your poems now. Kiwi shout outs from Aotearoa. Quincy Mac
Date: 11/20/2015 3:01:00 AM
Hi Quincy, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:14:00 AM
Kia Ora (Greetings) Linda, Thank you for the warm welcome. I am pretty stoked I have found this community of people expressing their thoughts, in all shapes and forms in the art of poetry. That's cool. I've never been on anything like this. Only Facebook and just a few people are interested in poetry on there. I love what I have read so far. Thank you Linda.
Date: 11/19/2015 8:59:00 PM
:) :) :) Hi Quincy, I like to read the new poets more than once. It's not easy to find a voice until I've read a few of their poems. That way, I'll learn how their pens flow. Your poem above seems to shoot and aim at the readers. In which I find interesting. You live, you learn, you share. Thanks for sharing your poem above. Outspoken, powerful. In between Free Verse and Epic. We use to have slam as a form. But, not anymore. LOL caused too much drama. Anyways, Hope to see you post again. Your newest poetic friend. SKAT
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:44:00 PM
Hey SKAT A, Awesome feedback, I appreciate it. I feel I'm also influenced a bit by underground hiphop and they way some of their lyrics are formed. Sometimes a bit to aggressive aimed at the reader haha. I can understand how slam form would cause drama lol. I will definitely post again. How soon can I post another piece?
Date: 11/19/2015 8:08:00 PM
Anyone who is reading this please give me some encouraging comments. I am a self taught poet/writer from the south pacific who dropped out of school at a early age. I couldn't read very well and have taught myself to become more literate by learning daily through reading and writing. I will take into account anyone's thoughts on my writings and please give me tips on becoming a better writer. I look forward to comments and sharing more of my poetry. Thank you :)
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:07:00 PM
Quincy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Quincy Mac
Date: 11/19/2015 9:40:00 PM
Hey SKAT A, Thanks for the reply. I have pages and pages of writing in my journal. They are pretty much freestyle writing similar to freestyle rhyming. Just whatever comes to mind influenced by experiences and knowledge that sticks in mind. I will share a piece each day ??
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:01:00 PM
Hi Quincy, I;m excited to read your poems. But, we have a problem. You only have one :( You will like it here. It's my pleasure to meet your Passion. thanks for the Big Hug... SKAT
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:19:00 PM
Kia ora (Greetings) SKAT A, Its great to meet you, BIG Hugs. I'm very excited about meeting fellow writers/poets on this site that I have just found today. I write daily as it has become a passion that fuels me very much. I currently live in my home land of New Zealand, I'm 32, A Father to an awesome 8 year old son, a longtime Skateboarder and a knowledge seeker. I look forward to reading some of your poetry... this is so exciting. PEACE