Eileen Manassian Poet Lyric

Re-Post of Come Inside- Stanzas Added By Richard Lamoureux

(Eileen)
Your heavy heart is weary, worn
Bloody and bruised, it’s fiercely torn
To Loneliness, a vow you've sworn
To dwell in night without a morn
Come inside

To live and love, you've lost your will 
Of sorrow’s cup you've had your fill
Desire’s longing, quiet…still
Heart frozen by rejection’s chill
Come inside

Chorus
Come inside my life, feel now the fire
Come inside my heart, dip in desire
Come inside my soul, to love aspire
Come inside my mind, let me inspire

(Richard)
Let love’s essence, flow through your veins 
Experience true peace again 
Live in a world devoid of pain 
Find shelter from the pouring rain 
Come inside 

To live and love, you'll know the thrill 
Of blissful cup, you'll drink your fill 
Desire quenched, within my will 
In the calm, let your heart be still 
Come inside 

(Eileen)
Chorus
Come inside my life, feel now the fire
Come inside my heart, dip in desire
Come inside my soul, to love aspire
Come inside my mind, let me inspire

Refrain
Come
Come
Come inside my body, come inside
Come and dip inside my pleasure’s tide
Come inside my body, come inside
Come glide into heaven, come abide
Come
Come
Come…..I N S I D E


Eileen Manassian Ghali with last two stanzas added by Richard Lamoureux. :) :) :) Thanks, Richard, for thinking it could be lengthier and adding your own personal touch. Love collabing with you. :)

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Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2015 at 8:30 AM "Let loves essence flow within your veins" has a better flow than what I wrote. It's interesting coming back to this one again.

Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2014 at 5:50 PM I hope things have improved since you posted this message. We take for granted our peaceful home here in Canada.

Richard Lamoureux January 4, 2014 at 9:52 AM Good Morning Eileen. I hope things have settled down in your part of the world. Eileen Manassian January 4, 2014 at 10:00 AM Hi, Richard.....Yes, for now but people are expecting a retaliation....We will see. Thanks for asking. I'm sleeping over at my brother's place so I won't be alone....Don't worry. Our days are in His hands...

Ken Carroll December 29, 2013 at 11:43 AM Hi Eileen, Nice collaboration..I like this one.. Ken Eileen Manassian December 29, 2013 at 5:35 PM Thanks, Ken. Always good to hear from you.

Richard D Seal December 29, 2013 at 11:24 AM I've spent last ten minutes trying to get a tune for this, definately has potential, great collab, well done both of you. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian December 29, 2013 at 5:34 PM Potential.....so.....not there yet, eh? Thank you for your efforts....

Richard Lamoureux December 29, 2013 at 10:43 AM My pleasure Eileen, so glad you let me add a small piece to your work of art. . Eileen Manassian December 29, 2013 at 10:47 AM Pleasure is All mine.... :-)