Home » Poems » Sara Kendrick » Repost Chocolate-Trochee

Repost Chocolate-Trochee

Rich chocolate 'pon my thin lips. On taste buds twang sits Minute; lifetime on big hips. Now clothes don't fit To a diet must commit Carrots celery dip Peanut chocolate dip permit My pants can now zip Having bigger problem now than ever....Ha!!LOL

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/23/2013 10:07:00 PM

How sweet it is to put upon the lips. How bitter it is to work off. I can so identify with this. Great poem!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/12/2013 8:19:00 PM

A very "sweet" poem, Sara, I enjoyed every morsel of it! I love chocolate, too, so I know how you feel. I have been there many times before! :) Great work!...Thank you for the kind comments!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/5/2013 11:03:00 PM

Hi Sara; It's not easy to give up something you like - like chocolate cake. I myself have never been on a diet. I don't like them. Enjoy life and be happy.... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2013 5:51:00 AM

- Yes, dear Sara I can relate this....:)))) - well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/3/2013 3:32:00 AM

:))))))) This is very timely excellent poem for me now that I'm committed to have diet by completely avoiding choco if possible (no diabetes just annoying fats on hips lol). This is a very delightful poem to read making me wear more smiles on my face this afternoon. Thank you so much my dear friend Sara. Have a great day! love much & biggest hugs, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2013 5:54:00 PM

Sara, I had a 7/5 Trochee contest a long long time ago. Was this one used in that? Just curious. It sure is a fun poem

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2013 5:50:00 PM

Sara, sounds good to me.. the whole diet thing.. LOL... love this witty write.. always~ Linda

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/2/2013 2:01:00 PM

Ha-ha-he-he-ha-ha....To heck with wide hips, Sara...Pig out!!...I'm working on a little tool shed myself (VERY little)...Oh waiter, I'll have a slice of cake for dessert (hold the cake please) Why is it that everything good for you tastes bad and everything bad for you taste good? Enjoyed this to the max - Tim

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/2/2013 1:03:00 PM

Oh My How I can relate. Glad your pants can zip..I am a big fan of elastic. lol. BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/2/2013 9:23:00 AM

This is such a clever little write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a powerful incentive this piece really is Sara! Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/2/2013 7:42:00 AM

heelarious, sara... who can resist chocolates?... you had me in stitches; knock-out piece!..:) huggs

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/2/2013 6:59:00 AM

Hi Sara, An entertaining and yet good write with humor.. Ken

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 10/2/2013 6:58:00 AM

Haha. Thanks for the chuckle this morning, Sara. I struggle with my weight and have trouble sticking to diets, so I totally related. Fun write! :)