Replayed Reveries: Hutain Poem

dusts of attic enter my soul heavy with old notes length- wise, etching memories from burnt coal as past chapters return for sighs. And goodbyes flash across gray skies seeking whispers this soul soon dwells, in reveries of eve’s tossed dyes; when time housed magical spells -------------- The Itty Bitty Contest Andrea Dietrich *Hutain form: 8 Lines, mix of 7- 8 syllables per line with rhyme scheme ababbcbc ( the more popular type)... ---------- Placed under verse category
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 4/6/2014 7:48:00 AM
Those old memories especially goodbyes...stay with us for our entire lives...coming back to visit..Ike you say...this is an awesome poem nett....some of mine, i wish i would have done differently...congratulations on your win...I love this poem.....
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Date: 4/6/2014 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, nette
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Date: 4/5/2014 8:42:00 PM
A lovely write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm
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Date: 4/4/2014 9:17:00 PM
I like your poem very much, Nette congrats.... SKAT
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Date: 4/4/2014 5:39:00 PM
nice win Nette, .....pd
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Date: 4/4/2014 12:08:00 PM
the unbeatable strength of your words ,nette... that leads you towards victory!! ..awesome piece still... CONGRATULATIONS dearest one!!! :'))
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Date: 4/4/2014 6:01:00 AM
Nette many congrats,,,as thoughtful n beautiful as ever,,,,,
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Date: 4/4/2014 12:38:00 AM
As always your imagery is spellbinding , Nette. Congrats in my contest. you had some good assonance and alliteration going on as well.
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Date: 10/14/2011 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Russell's "Challenge" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2011 9:59:00 AM
this is very lovely. At first I thought it was an instrument lying in the attic (which would be an example in your contest on instruments!) I love the sadness in this. Congrats too!!
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Date: 10/12/2011 2:19:00 PM
Engaging Write Nette, memories possibilitys, longing its all here i hope you do very well in the contest..
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Date: 10/12/2011 4:41:00 AM
Hey Nette congrats on your win.Very nice!
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Date: 10/12/2011 1:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/11/2011 11:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Nice going. Excellent. All the best. luv Ralph
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Date: 10/11/2011 9:23:00 PM
ah Nette luv..congrats again on a fantastic poem in this challenge .. u certainly mesmerize the readers.. your thoughts are so dazzling sweetie..enjoy...
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Date: 10/11/2011 11:58:00 AM
despite the dust of attics,it is a clean write, nette, nice day
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Date: 10/11/2011 9:45:00 AM
I do picture the writer of yore, with coal and slip in composition... and 'blink', this magical spell; which you have successfully spilled on your slip, will capture many souls dear poet ! TY for the glitter you have shared, which warms the poesy in me ! Have a wonderful week Nette...much love, james
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Date: 10/11/2011 12:14:00 AM
Beautiful poem with very thoughtful words penned here Nette.Enjoyed.
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