Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Replayed Reveries: Hutain Poem

dusts  of attic  enter my  soul

heavy with old notes length- wise,

etching memories from  burnt coal

as past chapters return for sighs.

And goodbyes flash across gray skies

seeking whispers this soul soon dwells,

in reveries of eve’s tossed dyes;

when time housed magical spells

                                                            

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The Itty Bitty Contest   Andrea Dietrich
 
*Hutain form: 8 Lines, mix of 7- 8 syllables per line with
  rhyme scheme ababbcbc ( the more popular type)... 
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Placed under verse category

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Donna Jones April 6, 2014 at 7:48 AM Those old memories especially goodbyes...stay with us for our entire lives...coming back to visit..Ike you say...this is an awesome poem nett....some of mine, i wish i would have done differently...congratulations on your win...I love this poem.....

Dr.Ram Mehta April 6, 2014 at 6:14 AM Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, nette

Kim Merryman April 5, 2014 at 8:42 PM A lovely write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

Skat A April 4, 2014 at 9:17 PM I like your poem very much, Nette congrats.... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A April 4, 2014 at 5:39 PM nice win Nette, .....pd

Aiyah Torres April 4, 2014 at 12:08 PM the unbeatable strength of your words ,nette... that leads you towards victory!! ..awesome piece still... CONGRATULATIONS dearest one!!! :'))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 4, 2014 at 6:01 AM Nette many congrats,,,as thoughtful n beautiful as ever,,,,,

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2014 at 12:38 AM As always your imagery is spellbinding , Nette. Congrats in my contest. you had some good assonance and alliteration going on as well.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 14, 2011 at 7:32 AM Congratulations on your poetry placing in Russell's "Challenge" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2011 at 9:59 AM this is very lovely. At first I thought it was an instrument lying in the attic (which would be an example in your contest on instruments!) I love the sadness in this. Congrats too!!

Joe Maverick October 12, 2011 at 2:19 PM Engaging Write Nette, memories possibilitys, longing its all here i hope you do very well in the contest..

Kash Poet October 12, 2011 at 4:41 AM Hey Nette congrats on your win.Very nice!

Lee Ramage October 12, 2011 at 1:05 AM Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee

Ralph Taylor October 11, 2011 at 11:38 PM Congrats on your win, nette. Nice going. Excellent. All the best. luv Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 11, 2011 at 9:23 PM ah Nette luv..congrats again on a fantastic poem in this challenge .. u certainly mesmerize the readers.. your thoughts are so dazzling sweetie..enjoy...

S.Jagathsimhan Nair October 11, 2011 at 11:58 AM despite the dust of attics,it is a clean write, nette, nice day

James Peranteau October 11, 2011 at 9:45 AM I do picture the writer of yore, with coal and slip in composition... and 'blink', this magical spell; which you have successfully spilled on your slip, will capture many souls dear poet ! TY for the glitter you have shared, which warms the poesy in me ! Have a wonderful week Nette...much love, james

Kash Poet October 11, 2011 at 12:14 AM Beautiful poem with very thoughtful words penned here Nette.Enjoyed.