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? What's the cost of having a place, 
           we all are in a race ??
      Trying to be the best, 
      and stand out from the rest. 
  No one cares about our efforts, 
  in the long run the way diverts. 
 Stay at your own pace, 
  You are just running behind a imaginary race. 
Trying hundred of times, is that a crime., 
or may be worse than a sour lime.?? ?
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Agustin Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 3:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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