Repitition

The kidney shaped lake
      Flowing
The kidney shaped lake
        Going deep
The kidney shaped lake
        Housing fresh fish
The kidney shaped lake
        Sometimes smooth and shiny
The kidney shaped lake
        Offering peaceful views of birds
The kidney shaped lake
        With wind blowing white tipped caps
The kidney shaped lake
        Sometimes rolling with fish in their agony
The kidney shaped lake
        Brings us scenes of nature kept in memories
The kidney shaped lake
        Remains for our visit when hearts may be heavy
The kidney shaped lake
        Brings us back home again to gaze on its beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Hengeli Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Thanks so much...I live along a lake in Florida
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 10:45 AM
I enjoyed this! The words and the picture, both very creative!! Blessings, Rhonda
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