Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Repetitive Beats

i can hear this rain
tapping against my window
the beats more steady
than that of my heart

(from my poem, thoughts on the rift)
 
December 22, 2019
Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden

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Caren Krutsinger December 25, 2019 at 3:26 AM Pretty poem ... powerfully done.

Chris Green December 23, 2019 at 7:18 AM Love these four lines, they say so much and could easily stand on their own. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Sandra Adams December 23, 2019 at 3:01 PM Thank you Chris...i need all the luck and wishes i can get these days...my muse seems to be off... hugs

Na Na December 22, 2019 at 3:07 PM Nice one. Best of luck in the contest. Your in the contest mood today :)~ Sandra Adams December 22, 2019 at 4:38 PM Thank you Greg... trying to play catch up... don't know that i will...but trying... hugs

Alexis Y. December 22, 2019 at 3:06 PM Wow! Sandra, Your four lines were written. They most definitely stand alone. I wish the best of luck in the contest.Off to your entire poem. Have a great day:-) Alexis Sandra Adams December 22, 2019 at 4:37 PM Thank you so much Alexis :) hugs