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Repetitive Beats

i can hear this rain tapping against my window the beats more steady than that of my heart (from my poem, thoughts on the rift) December 22, 2019 Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory Barden

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/25/2019 3:26:00 AM

Pretty poem ... powerfully done.

Chris Green

Date: 12/23/2019 7:18:00 AM

Love these four lines, they say so much and could easily stand on their own. Best wishes in the contest my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/23/2019 3:01:00 PM

Thank you Chris...i need all the luck and wishes i can get these days...my muse seems to be off... hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/22/2019 3:07:00 PM

Nice one. Best of luck in the contest. Your in the contest mood today :)~

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/22/2019 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Greg... trying to play catch up... don't know that i will...but trying... hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/22/2019 3:06:00 PM

Wow! Sandra, Your four lines were written. They most definitely stand alone. I wish the best of luck in the contest.Off to your entire poem. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/22/2019 4:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Alexis :) hugs