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There be the goats afloat of devil’s purloin ditch of mix of fact, the faker spoils “the child!” ~~~~~~ There be the child revived adults of quickened souls a Ga pe, Masters souls of love, “the saints!” ====== Note: 'American, Double Cinquain(Didactic)

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Date: 11/22/2011 12:40:00 PM
So happy to see your poem winning in Brian's contest, John. Congratulations, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Choice Verse" contest Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2011 3:56:00 PM
Fine write,John.Congratulations on your win....keep flying..Agape Moses.
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Date: 11/21/2011 4:36:00 AM
Many congrats on your big win in the contest.
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Date: 11/20/2011 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM in Brain's contest John. Well done.
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Date: 11/20/2011 6:53:00 PM
Congrats Moses on another big win .. a dynamic write luv,,
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Date: 11/20/2011 4:06:00 PM
A great form and a great message. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/17/2011 9:54:00 PM
Boy, you are getting into these little poetry forms, john! I like how you divided Agape in that one line. For a contest?
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John Freeman
Date: 11/18/2011 10:10:00 AM
Yep!
Date: 11/16/2011 2:29:00 PM
This is very well done, John. Below is the moat with the devil (or goat) and we have to try to rise above the concept thought process. Excellent cinquain! Love, Carolyn
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