John Freeman Poet Cinquain

Repentance

There be
the goats afloat
of devil’s purloin ditch 
of mix of fact, the faker spoils 
“the child!”
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There be
the child revived
adults of quickened souls
a Ga pe, Masters souls of love,
“the saints!”
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Note: 'American, Double Cinquain(Didactic)

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Carolyn Devonshire November 22, 2011 at 12:40 PM So happy to see your poem winning in Brian's contest, John. Congratulations, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown November 22, 2011 at 12:09 PM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Choice Verse" contest Moses. Love, Carol

Olusegun Arowolo November 21, 2011 at 3:56 PM Fine write,John.Congratulations on your win....keep flying..Agape Moses.

Joseph Osita November 21, 2011 at 4:36 AM Many congrats on your big win in the contest.

Bob Quigley November 20, 2011 at 10:00 PM Congratulations on your HM in Brain's contest John. Well done.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 20, 2011 at 6:53 PM Congrats Moses on another big win .. a dynamic write luv,,

Joyce Johnson November 20, 2011 at 4:06 PM A great form and a great message. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2011 at 9:54 PM Boy, you are getting into these little poetry forms, john! I like how you divided Agape in that one line. For a contest? John Freeman November 18, 2011 at 10:10 AM Yep!

Carolyn Devonshire November 16, 2011 at 2:29 PM This is very well done, John. Below is the moat with the devil (or goat) and we have to try to rise above the concept thought process. Excellent cinquain! Love, Carolyn