Notes About The Poem

Repeating Colors

amber blooms on hills
and fluffy sheep in green grass
puffy clouds above

cobalt skies, blue lake
every day is tinged golden
red butterflies flit

raspberries are ripe
in the hour cardinal sings
from his pine tree perch

diamond sun reveals
mystery jewels of light
flashing hide and seek
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 5:56 AM
There’s something about the intertwining of your words that surprise us! I nearly expected to see green sheep and fluffy and puffy so close, due to rhyme, that I felt as if you had already spoken of clouds. And the second verse with cobalt skies and blue lake then the serendipitous red butterflies…a fave for me!!
Buehler Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 12:20 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Kim. Thank you very much. Your appreciation is delight. :)
Krutsinger Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 8:41 AM
This appealed to my artistic side!
Buehler Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 8:01 PM
That is really nice to know. Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Colorful display in your Haiku. God blesses us in so many ways. We can see the beauty that He has supplied all around. Your visit to my page with congrats was inspiring. Sara
Buehler Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 9:52 AM
God's love for us is truly evident in nature. Thank you so much for your thoughts. Evelyn
DiMino Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Love the artwork, warm and alive with feeling. Beautiful, descriptive poem: "cobalt skies, blue lake every day is tinged golden red butterflies flit" Great stuff!
Buehler Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 7:47 PM
Your remarks thrill and delight, Joe. I appreciate them very much. Blessings
Buhagiar Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 2:03 AM
Your mastery on color and imagery is great. A lovely poem.
Buehler Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 10:52 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.
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