Repeating Colors

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amber blooms on hills and fluffy sheep in green grass puffy clouds above cobalt skies, blue lake every day is tinged golden red butterflies flit raspberries are ripe in the hour cardinal sings from his pine tree perch diamond sun reveals mystery jewels of light flashing hide and seek

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/4/2023 5:56:00 AM

There’s something about the intertwining of your words that surprise us! I nearly expected to see green sheep and fluffy and puffy so close, due to rhyme, that I felt as if you had already spoken of clouds. And the second verse with cobalt skies and blue lake then the serendipitous red butterflies…a fave for me!!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/4/2023 12:20:00 PM

I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Kim. Thank you very much. Your appreciation is delight. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/6/2022 8:41:00 AM

This appealed to my artistic side!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/6/2022 8:01:00 PM

That is really nice to know. Thank you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2022 5:55:00 AM

Colorful display in your Haiku. God blesses us in so many ways. We can see the beauty that He has supplied all around. Your visit to my page with congrats was inspiring. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/30/2022 9:52:00 AM

God's love for us is truly evident in nature. Thank you so much for your thoughts. Evelyn

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/29/2022 7:15:00 PM

Love the artwork, warm and alive with feeling. Beautiful, descriptive poem: "cobalt skies, blue lake every day is tinged golden red butterflies flit" Great stuff!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/29/2022 7:47:00 PM

Your remarks thrill and delight, Joe. I appreciate them very much. Blessings

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/29/2022 2:03:00 AM

Your mastery on color and imagery is great. A lovely poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/29/2022 10:52:00 AM

Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.