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Repeated Rebellion

Repeated Rebellion
Shielded ventilation silently choke within Vision fading blackouts around and around again Captivity corrupted as greed fills the plate The burning acidic desire for everything to hate Vivid recollections splash across the head Proud of the torture in a painful death bed Fearlessly without remorse emotions are so weak Truth is in all the lies if the answer is what you seek Destined for damnation a one way ticket to Hell History repeats in cycles as all of the world rebels
bmdavey@2002/revised 10/28/17

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Date: 10/29/2017 1:49:00 PM
Lets hope we still have a world after this. A well written couplet. Enjoyed the read.
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/29/2017 2:43:00 PM
Hope is all we can do, thank you for taking the time to read and comment it is always appreciated
Date: 10/29/2017 10:13:00 AM
Oh, it paints such a bleak picture. It is horrible that there are people like this in the world, Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/29/2017 12:03:00 PM
I agree with you whole heartedly my friend

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