Repair

My shoes,she and he pair,

Torn beyond repair,

No means to re pair!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dunn Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Muhammad, this sounds like the pair represent your parents or those whom raised you, now on your own maybe your feet have traveled many miles, now so far away or gone they cannot repair what distance and time has done to your shoes, am I write. I enjoyed reading this work tonight I will read another, cheri
Thajudeen Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Yes,dear poet Cheri,you are correct.Thank you so much for your comment and recommend.God bless you.
Nunez Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 2:52 AM
Tragic representation of a ruined relationship. Nice one, Safa. Rated! Kim Patrice :)
Thajudeen Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 5:31 AM
God blessed your knowledge.I do pray to increase more God.Thank you dear poet Nunez.
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